All Comments on 'Closer Cop'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Pretty dumb ending. The Bart line is overused; grossly so, in this instance.

beatman04beatman044 months ago

The "Signs" wife epilog. Thanks for giving us an ending. She was definitely in love with Steve and the husband was right to dump her

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Seems like almost every story this author writes leads to suicide or murder/suicide, etc. A member of thr Sheriff's team who ignored a suicide plea is a pile of dung. Kelly should dump him and move on. All the sudden incest orgy crap was inane.

bigeightguybigeightguy24 days ago

I enjoyed the story, but the ending was a bit dark for my taste.

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I write as hobby. I try to avoid formula pieces as much as possible. No came home early, found a car in the driveway, etc. Having said that, it's probably impossible to make a completely new story. As the good book says, "There's nothing new under the sun." I'm sure that stori...