All Comments on 'Closet Exhibitionist Pt. 01'

This was a very well written story, I found it very arousing. I'm looking forward to your next work of art, I'm not a writer, but what you wrote kept me anticipating what was coming next. Thank you for sharing this with us, please continue to entertain with your wonderful intriguing writing.

Do tell, you'll like it better.

Every picture tells a story, your playgirl magazine was part right. The girls in playboy talk to me, while I'm busy of course.

It's all good

this was hot, and erotic, chapter 2 should be awesome as well.

But too much of it was simply non-erotic. Lots of words? Yes. Erotic? Not for me.

Disappointed.

Three stars.

Hot and fun ... gonna need more

You are off to a good start. I want to hear more. What happens next and how will you continue to exhibit yourself?

Very nice flow of the story line and very good climax.

Scribbled by numbers and still talent free