All Comments on 'Closing the Deal'

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daylilygardenerdaylilygardeneralmost 8 years ago
Hot

I worked part-time as a realtor. I would never have asked an "assistant" to provide the special perks...I would have handled that request myself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Oh I loved this story......I am so wet and wanting more; more of the story to read and more action. .. . .I would love to help sell properties.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow

Very erotic and well written. I will never look at a realty sign the same way now.

BigrimmstalesTooBigrimmstalesTooalmost 8 years ago
It just needed to be a little longer

I know it was classed as group sex but the perspective was rather unidimensional, especially in the last story where it was voyeuristic until the last few paragraphs. Then is finished too quickly. I think it needed longer to really develop both the people and the sexual imagery.

multieroFTSmultieroFTSabout 7 years ago
Hot Groupsex

Just to let you know that I like the depiction of groupsex here. But as a guy points out, I expect some more details of the bonus scene with Todd & Courtney.

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