All Comments on 'Closing Time'

by jake1969

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davemackerdavemackeralmost 11 years ago
Whats the motivation here

Its clear to see what would motivate a guy here, but after describing the girl as liking the guy but never letting on after a year and a half of working together what's her motivation for this occasion. If either one had been described as just started the job, then I would have understood, but after a year and a half a little motivation would have made it a better story.

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