All Comments on 'Cloud Nine'

need I say more ?

try again in more realistic english,we dont need shakespeare writing porn.

The odds of them actually finding their real

Mother&Son match out India's population

of 1.27 billion.....

How about they head into a big city and

take a paternity test then well know in 48hrs

if this story even belongs in Incest category

Instead if just their wishful/delusional thinking..

And writer just because you can use every

last word in a dictionary doesn't mean you

should.

...you'd be ten times as talented as you actually are.

What a load of pretentious crap. You can listen to Nirvana but it won't make you Kurt Cobain, and you can read erotica but it won't make you a talented author. Apparently, it didn't even make you into competent writer. This was garbage.

Jesus... English is not my first language and I still can feel a lot of crap here.

I loved this for the poetic language. Thank you.

Please ignore the Phillisteins and do carry on writing with your own style.

All those who want just the fucking in their stories, will have many other places to go to.

WOW that was incredible.