All Comments on 'Club 35 - Third Visit Pt. 01'

Love the concept of Christine, the employee, dominating her boss, Jennifer, so completely and gay Mark, another employee, greasing up Jennifer's asshole, for an evening of fun. Wonderful writing. waiting for Pt. 2

I raelly loved the story, - it held my interest from start to finish over the whole account.Had you though of adding a visual display of Christine - and the others - as they went through their various ordeals. It wouldn't have to be perfect art - just stick people - unless you are an artist. It would so much more to the story itself and would add to the enjoyment of those who read the account. I would be happy to discuss this further if anyone would would like to contact me. I live in Australia - but I have Skype and would be happy to chat on the phone with anyone. Leo at LBurke@nanning.com.au

things go on and i can feel with Jennifer.

one of the best stories here