All Comments on 'Club Paradise'

You've hooked me

Great story, conflicted feelings highlighted believably. I miss the London strip pubs. More please

Thanks for making time to share your stories. Your character - threw the deadlock and bar as a matter of habit. As an experienced road warrior, he would have checked the route to the emergency exit FIRST.

Loved it!

typo on page three

"He such had a massive boner"

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