All Comments on 'Club Tranquility Pt. 01'

First rate story, I look forward to further chapters, with more details about Emily's gorgeous figure being liberally splattered.

Wow, you made me laugh.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

A penis parade and a handjob contest.

🤣🤣🤣🤣

You write so well, I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more chapters

Excellent story. I look forward to read about Dan coating Emily's cervix with one of his huge loads.

Hot story a bit out there and funny at times but all in all enjoyable. Well written and well developed. Looking forward to future chapters and you telling us more about this cupel.

Great story. Hoping to see more of “Rock Hard Rodney” in the story. Looking forward to the pussy parade in the next chapter. Maybe a squirting for distance contest.

Hope Part 2 is soon!

So wonderful you have returned, and with a promising new series! Definitely looking forward to Emily getting better acquainted with Dan and his monster. 😉

Nicely written little tale, with some fun moments. I loved ‘hors devours’ assuming you meant to do it and it wasn’t a spell check error. Somehow devouring hors d’œuvres just amused me!

Glad to see you back!

Ridiculous and juvenile- I liked it!

This story is fantastic! I really enjoyed your sense of humor too.

Can we please have more chapters?! Thanks in advance!

Wonderful story. Great descriptive writing and super sexy plot.

Absolutely loved it.