All Comments on 'Clubbing'

Non erotic is two spots down.

Good grief this is drivel. You had one job and you screwed they up.

This was an interesting story and concept. Would be very interested in seeing how Concord came to be, and the development of the mind control. Maybe a sort of prequel and sequel?

ya douche bag, it may not be erotic to some, doesn't meant it isn't erotic to others.

also, go fuck yourself

It was a good story, well written too. Good Job

If your going to remain anonymous when commenting then just fuck off and shut up.

To the NON-EROTIC wanker... so I searched mind control stories using the tags so your comment makes no sense to me or anyone else unless they searched non-erotic stories and then got this one. Also how is sucking on bold and getting hard and causing the victim to cum, not erotic? It’s not the most erotic but it’s a bit erotic.

Fucking anonymous dicks, all of you.

I'm of the same opinion as you when it comes to people who love to trash your work but not put a name to it (even a fake name for cripes sake!). Fuck em.