All Comments on 'Cockatoo Pt. 13'

Anazing story. I didn't realize how much I was hooked until this chapter when I stomped around saying 'no no no no no'... I really hope for a happy ending for these 3... They just have to live happily ever after, they gotta!

Then realize this should have been over several chapters ago.

Each Chapter is better than the last one. I look forward to reading more.

Shit. This just escladed from 0 to 100 in one page didn't it. I'm literally so hooked on this story, I check every day to see if you have updated. I had a gut feeling that's what Alex was doing and that Areeya knew but damn really to end the fight with that ... Brilliant for the story sucks for my heart that ... Brilliant job and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Finally the story progresses again. Part 12 was pretty weak given that it included only two somehow ordinary, uninteresting sex scenes and no story whatsoever. Much better this time. There are so many paths the story can take. Can't wait for another chapter.

you must write more than 1 page at a time such a good story

i hope there is more