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All Comments on 'Cody Pt. 01'

by SoftTouchGayBoy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great writing

Thanks for sharing your talent. Enjoyed this story very much. Can’t wait for the next chapter

LeeclarkLeeclarkover 3 years ago

It was rather interesting though, I'd change up your dialog, changing up the structure of your story might help. All in all I look forward to what's next.

SoftTouchGayBoySoftTouchGayBoyover 3 years agoAuthor
LeeClark

thanks for your comment. "It was rather interesting though, I'd change up your dialog, changing up the structure of your story might help. All in all I look forward to what's next."

Can you elaborate on, "change up your dialog, changing up the structure of your story?" I don't fully understand what you mean.

GybbsGybbsover 3 years ago
more please!

I was picturing Dalton Briggs as Cody ... one of my all-time favorites!

easysluteasyslutover 3 years ago

More please...I'm wanting to be Cody so bad...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

Amazing. So hot. Please add more parts.

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My attraction to cute, young, fresh looking, slender, or skinny, physically fit, petite in size, sexually mature straight dudes has directed many of my life choices since roughly the period coterminous with puberty. I’ve always been attracted to the kind of young guy that migh...