All Comments on 'Coed Trick or Treaters Taken'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It is an erotic idea but the execution of it was curiously unarousing. The tragic ending was a real downer.

BTW, 'disinterested' does not mean 'uninterested'.

WittonWittonover 1 year ago

Anonymous got it right: this was a wooden rendering of what might have been an interesting story line. "Erotic" means "arousing" - maybe teenage boys would have been turned on by this.

The ending was pointless - and stupid: college girls live in a world of Plan B and abortion on demand.

And anonymous got it right when (s)he suggested obliquely that you use words you understand;look up the definition of 'disinterested' and read it until you understand why it is not a synonym for "Uninterested"

LitvakPeeJayLitvakPeeJayover 1 year agoAuthor

disinterested adjective

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dis·​in·​ter·​est·​ed | \ (ˌ)dis-ˈin-trə-stəd ; -ˈin-tə-ˌre-, -tə-rə-, -tər-; -ˈin-ˌtre- \

Definition of disinterested

1a : not having the mind or feelings engaged (see ENGAGED sense 1) : not interested

telling them in a disinterested voice

— Tom Wicker

disinterested in women

— J. A. Brussel

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You need a good proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

LitvakPeeJay you could use some serious advice on writing. Your less than stellar scribblings did not go well. You are simply out of touch apparently..........

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