by LitvakPeeJay
It is an erotic idea but the execution of it was curiously unarousing. The tragic ending was a real downer.
BTW, 'disinterested' does not mean 'uninterested'.
Anonymous got it right: this was a wooden rendering of what might have been an interesting story line. "Erotic" means "arousing" - maybe teenage boys would have been turned on by this.
The ending was pointless - and stupid: college girls live in a world of Plan B and abortion on demand.
And anonymous got it right when (s)he suggested obliquely that you use words you understand;look up the definition of 'disinterested' and read it until you understand why it is not a synonym for "Uninterested"
disinterested adjective
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dis·in·ter·est·ed | \ (ˌ)dis-ˈin-trə-stəd ; -ˈin-tə-ˌre-, -tə-rə-, -tər-; -ˈin-ˌtre- \
Definition of disinterested
1a : not having the mind or feelings engaged (see ENGAGED sense 1) : not interested
telling them in a disinterested voice
— Tom Wicker
disinterested in women
— J. A. Brussel
LitvakPeeJay you could use some serious advice on writing. Your less than stellar scribblings did not go well. You are simply out of touch apparently..........