All Comments on 'Coffee'

With a beautiful humorous twist at the end. Thank You. Ronnie W.

A cut far above most of the stories here.

Very well written. A lovely seduction with a deep exposition of the characters.

I especially liked how I was never sure of the main characters attentions until the very end of the story. The uncertainty added much tension to the story.

Well done.

Okay, there goes my morning. I have to read your others now.

amazing tale of seduction. seems so sweet.

Truly Outstanding. Keep writing....

*kisses fingers and tosses the kiss at the monitor* Superb, wonderfully writen. Very well done, and I must say, lovely imagry. You can see every action, and hear every sound, feel and imagine the emotions. Very well writen, hope to read more from you.

Ditto all the previous comments! Keep writing

This is a wonderful story. I really would like to see another chapter or two or three to it. I love the way you built everything up.

may I offer you some coffee. nice erotic touch you have there

What a lovely story! Can't wait to read more of your works!

~Honey

"Because I need to put it back together with parts of me in it." is the sexiest line I've read in quite a while!

I want you to write more and more and then some more.

"All your expressions."

Great stuff! I want them all... all of your stories. The dialog is so smooth, I really need to be taking notes.

You never know what you're going to find at a coffee house. A good brew, good conversation and sometimes a lot more. I do like your romances.

Boyd

Very well written.Not just sexy as hell,but a great story to boot.would love to see what happens with these two.I like the TRUST issue in it too.

But it sure won't be the last. Very romantic, and it ends up being very sexy and sweet at the same time. Makes me want to hang out at Starbuck's, and I'm not even a coffee drinker. Brava! Bravissima!

This is the second one I have read of yours. I must say you are very versatile. Great job.

I have read most of your stories and they are wonderful. The dialogue is witty and some events that happen are just too cute! It makes me think if i was in the heroine's position what would i do? I would probably tell the male character to fuck off because he is arrogant, but in a cute and good way. It is nice that the characters are actually in their character and don't change while they are having sex. wonderful stories.

Recidiva, that was wonderful. "Because I need to put it back together with parts of me in it." Oh my...a line that will be remembered always.

You've expressed a lot here. Thanks for sharing it. Bob'sGirl mentioned your work to me last night and I've very glad. I look forward to reading others.

great story Kathy

Such depth of character with so little active description! A well defined environment and action adds to the subtlty of character psychology...And all that without counting the powerful erotic scene...

This was really, really good. In fact, I hope there is more. I love arrogant men, especially if they are possessive AND loving. He'll probably disappoint me, but I like his attitude.

I love this story! I'll be sure to read Chapter 2 as well!

I found romance as well as powerful eroticism. This is the first story of yours that I've read and what a pleasure it was.

Sorry, but you mixed up tenses at the beginning. Try to stick with one. Past tense works best for this kind of narrative. Nice story otherwise.

Arrogant and pretentious. The villain doesn’t usually get introduced till further into the story.