by the_biochemist_98
I’m really enjoying the story so far, it promises much. The only thing that
I’m not happy with is that it’s too short! Im just getting into it and then I have to wait again.
This isn’t really a criticism, it’s a compliment. I can’t wait for more!
Deepest sympathies for your loss. Your love story is compellingly told, and I really look forward to seeing it played out. Thank you for the first two chapters; more cannot come soon enough.
Enjoying the story so far. Great read but 2 pages at a time is a bit of a pain.
There was repetition of thought when describing what Brandon did to Claire and her mum, but otherwise pretty good chapter. 5*
I have enjoyed both parts. Looking forward to part 3. 5 stars. Don't have a literotica handle.