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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Holy Cow!!! I’m really getting into your story, don’t stop!!!

maxmacmaxmacover 1 year ago

Excellent, please keep going!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Maybe it's the scientist thing, but sometimes you are too eloquent for the thoughts you're trying to convey. Relationships and sex are at the most fundamental level of us as humans. Your prose should match the plot line. Otherwise, the general story arc is excellent. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You missed the mark on describing the guy's first time from his perspective. She felt hot and wet. That was it. For a 32 year old man with no experience, his first time should have been much more descriptive.

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Structural biologist and academic currently living and working in Sweden. I came here owing to my wonderful wife. She loved the site. Hope you find my stories appealing. Any suggestions or comments are welcome.

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