All Comments on 'Cold'

Excellent start, lets have some more. Nice to se a twist at the end

this was a good one. I hope your other stories are as intense and well written.

This is a very promising for a first timer. Keep on writing, writing and writing and I'm sure you have what it takes to be a very successful author

damn hot story,nice details. some typos, but not enough to distract. i liked the neat tie up at the end. the message, the motive behind her fuck. keep writing and submitting, i too like it rough and sweet.G

Great story. You hit the ground running with that one. Keep 'em coming...please.

Well written, good grammar. Would like to know 'her' better. I like strong confident women.