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by Takachan556

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FlamingTongueOfDesireFlamingTongueOfDesireover 3 years ago
So get on with the story

Hardly even a tease, really

Takachan556Takachan556over 3 years agoAuthor
Hey guys!

Finally got this piece published after 3 times. My first story ever put on this site. Pretty cool, huh?

Anyway, looking to some constructive criticism, and please, don't start any fights about not fitting reality. Got enough of those already

Have a good day, everyone. Peace!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You call that little scribble a story? Keep your day job.

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