All Comments on 'Collected Pt. 01'

I'm usually not into sci-fi stuff, but this one grabbed and held my attention. Very well written tale. Now I'll be looking for part 2.

I find myself thinking similar thoughts to Submisky35, this isn’t normally my kind of thing either erotic sci-fi. I always empathise with the characters in any story regardless of their gender it’s a process that often leads me into trouble because I automatically seek out realistic responses to the plot lines.

Non consent and abuse are hard triggers for me but the reluctance aspect is a huge turn on, with the possibilities of ‘what if’. Technically this isn’t BDSM because she didn’t consent but nevertheless she’s in a situation that is going to arouse her. Social conventions look down on those who desire that urge to be helpless, even looking at primal urges its a bad idea for survival in general. My response is fuck society so long as you aren’t hurting anyone else do what feels good.

So yeah, looking forward to reading more, thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)