All Comments on 'Collected Pt. 02'

That arm binding sounds horrendous, I don’t think it’s physically possible (?) either way I’m damned sure that I couldn’t do it. Then there’s that 10cm tall collar, I don’t consider myself to be freakishly short but that would eliminate any head movement.

Now that she’s cooperating willingly and not as a survival response it’s leaning towards the TPE sort of BDSM, plus unrealistic body modifications and positions this is rapidly approaching too much for me. I may give your next chapter another shot but either way good luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

To avoid misconceptions: This is basically a fetish fairy tale, not a story about a realistic BDSM relationship adhering to SSC principles.

@Tess: My advice would be to not take tales like this too seriously. Since the notion of aliens enslaving earth women is already preposterous, I saw no reason to limit myself to an otherwise realistic scenario but choose to explore certain fetishes to the max. Given your sensibilities, I’d suggest forgoing the next part since it only gets worse ...

I sure hope this story will continue.