All Comments on 'Colleen Ch. 02'

...Chapter 1. I am not as into girl-girl as straight male-female, but still excellent writing

I'm loving the character detail and the originality of the tale. If anything, the sex scenes have been a little stunted, but far better too short than too long with the main focus on story development. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series and the adventures of all the hot characters with undoubtedly more thrown in to the mix. Top marks so far...

The new set of characters took the story to the next level. I enjoyed Colleen's continued boldness with presenting list of adventures she wanted to experience before the trip was over. Did she really know what she was getting herself into? Is it possible to accomplish all this in just a few short days? Her ability to embrace what lies ahead simply makes her that much more desirable. Her character becomes more real, as she is shocked to find her Master with another, but quickly reverts back to being his Sub, as she remembers her promise to be his sex toy for the rest of the trip.

When in Amsterdam.....

Great story. I'm enjoying it immensely. All of the background and well orchestrated sex is fabulous. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.