All Comments on 'Colleen Ch. 03'

I am a 78yold sentimental slob !! There were several descriptive scenes that brought tears to my eyes !!

This series was wonderful and well written and I hope that you will continue to produce other work. I enjoyed every moment of reading about Colleen and Bobby and their families.

Really enjoyed the story, you definitely didn't waste your time in writing it.

awesome. i loved it.

but i think that the last half of ch3 lacked a little more fucking

this is one of the best stories i have read it's well witten and a good and long, and goin to post this as anon because i found a plot its about LOVE

Read it all in one session. Truly a labor of love I'd imagine. Wish all the folks I'd crossed paths with were as generally nice a group as this family.

Very well done and worth the wait, Cheers

I just finished reading all three chapters consecutively, and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was hooked from the very beginning, and you did an excellent job of creating characters that the reader can connect with. Great job!

This story leaves a tear in my eye every time I read it. It is certainly one of the best on the site.

I read it all in one session, and tears were flowing down though mist of it. A truly touching love story.

that was awsm man the best thing about this story is that its not about simple sex and fucking like crazy it has a brilliant story that the reader feels more interested in so all in all an excellent story

A truly incredible story, very well told. Thank you for bringing to life such tender emotions. Truly wonderful

I started reading for the titillation. Got caught up in the story and the sex became secondary. A beautiful story of an alternative lifestyle. I found myself getting emotional over the warmth and sensitivity that you gave to the characters. Thanks for the opportunity to read your work.

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This should have been in Romance , because it was a consummate (no pun intended) story.

By the way, I did read it all at one setting. I just couldn't stop once started... It is now some three minutes shy of 11:00 PM and I am off to bed.

Good night!

SreWolfe

Truly a great story from a fantastic writer!

I really enjoyed the story. it got you hooked and couldn't stop reading. Yuor writing is very well done. thank you

This is a very nice story

sooo im a really slow reader but it actually took me 6 hours streight to read all 3 chapters and i absolutly loved it ur awesome love your stories

P.S

my pussy is raw...he he....

faithful reader

What a wonderful, loving erotic story !! I've read many stories here; many, but this one was special. I read it all the way thru in 2 sittings...Thank You Texas for this tale. I loved Colleen, and respected Uncle Bobby. The story was very well written; I hope to read more stories from you in the future. Kniceguy in Colorado

Well I took you up on your challenge and read all three chapters in one sitting. Not a very good challenge, cos it was so so easy. That's how much I loved Colleen. I really want to thank you for writing this from the bottom of my heart. It was the most beautiful romance I've ever read or seen. 100 is nowhere near high enough. I feel... Well to be perfectly honest I can't explain it, but I felt so involved in the story that it is quite frankly unexplainable. So thank you and may the Goddess bless you.

This is one of the most touching stories I have ever read. What started as a story to tittilate the senses turned into a beautiful experience about life. This man is truly a great writer!!

I won't repeat what everyone here has told you! lol...I started reading and couldn't stop! What a great story! I haven't found many here that inspired so many emotions! Great job and thank you for a wonderful read!

You are a great writer. This could be published and would be a best seller. You might have to tone it down slightly for the general public - but not too much.

Big strapping man, crying like a baby. I read these stories for erotic stimulation, but this one pulled at my heart strings. There is hope for the male species, made evident by this touching tale, for if we males can write like this, feel like this, then women everywhere can still have a glimmer of hope that they will find one of us. I'm afraid the rest if the Literotica world however is now frowning in a jealous moment of envy. You have raised the bar....thank you.

I've read more than my share of stories on quite a few sites. Some hot and steamy, some long, slow, loving, and the very few rare ones like this, that include everything I really want. I had already read the first 2 installments when this came out, but I decided to take you up on your suggestion and read all 3 sequentially. Let me just say, it's been nearly 4 hours well spent, and let me simply say, thank you, for the wonderfull story.

I don't read! It's not that I "can't", I just don't take to reading like lots of folks do. So when I say that I could barely put this story aside for work, eating, and sleeping, it is a compliment of the highest order. I experienced tears, laughter, wonder, and loved the characters from beginning to end. The story teller, Bobby, (really the author), describes people and events in such exquisite detail that I feel I am there in the house - or wherever - with them. Congratulations! Get a new envelope out for your new bills and get the next story started. Maybe you should publish this one on your own. It's so much better than most of the crap on the bookshelves anywhere. Thanks again.

and impressive

The story line was fantastic, the characters lovable, the sex beautiful, thank you for writing this story. I will come back to it time and time again.

Loved it well written was intresting fun and made me feel very happy and contented the best kind thanks.

Wow - what a great story - it was one of the most sensual and loving stories I have read, not only on this site, but anywhere - Bobby and Colleen show how love and honesty can really come through - the story was so well written and must have taken a lot of time and thought by the author - it will be hard for him/her to create another of this calibre - Thank you for a wonderful story

Man, I can tell that this was a labor of love. I have read many stories on this site and there are more than a few that have aroused me, but this great story both aroused me and touched my heart. Some of the sex scenes described were sizzling, but the were also very tastefully done. I truly believe that with a little bit of editing to correct the few mistakes that I noticed that this would be great romance novel. Thank you so much for your time and effort in writing this story about love and family.

I loved your story - I read all three chapters today and I am so pleased I did... Truly loved it. Made me cry too (yeah what a big girl i know!)

Thanks for your time and effort.

Very very good work...

But,I loved it all and am happy that you were finally able to finish the series.

As most of the posts have said, I've read many stories on Literotica, but this is hands down the best I've ever read. The characters were real and believable...the plot was so real, I read the entire series in one night. You are an extremely talented author. Thanks for a terrific read.

I have read many stories here on Literotica and none of them stand up to the quality of this series. I read all 3 back to back and hated when I had to take time away from them to do daily tasks. I truly looked forward to coming back to continue reading these stories.

I can only think of perhaps 3 or 4 very well written stories on Literotica, Montanna Summer being one of them. But this story is absolutely remarkable. Every human emotion was brought forth in the writing of this fantastic love story.

It was a long wait for Chapter 03 and I drifted away from Literotica awhile because the vast majority of the stories here are poorly written. Although I give every author credit for trying, there are only a few that have been able to keep me interested from beginning to end. This one had me rivited. I smiled, I laughed, I teared up, I felt sad, I felt happy, I was angry (but only with Barbara), and I was a part of this story from beginning to end because of the excellent writing by you, Texas Refugee.

The wait was well worth it and I thank you for such a marvelous story for all of us to enjoy.

God has a plan... and while you and I might not know all the details, we just "know" when it feels right.<p>

Husband and wife being #1 to each other is wonderfully illustrated in your story, yet too many times either husband or wife is demoted to second place when kids arrive.<p>

Yes, your story is good and a Godsend to me personally. I am sitting here at the computer without a woman like Colleen or her mom in my life. When the time is right, that will be if it's meant to be.<p>

Maybe in a future story you can add conversation between characters to the effect of husband and wife being #1 to each other. After all, if the kids make a conscious choice for a life mate who will always be their #1 and it's fully reciprocated, haven't they just done their best to put themselves and their mate on a path for lifelong happiness?<p>

If those kids in turn teach it to their children, will it not be a blessing to all their future generations? We both know it will and the readers of this comment will know, too.<p>

In the following, all caps is not meant as yelling... just to emphasize importance.<p>

TEACH YOUR KIDS TO LOVE EACH OTHER, N0 MATTER WHAT.<p>

TEACH YOUR KIDS TO EARN EACH OTHER'S RESPECT, NO MATTER WHAT.<p>

LOVE YOUR KIDS AND BE WORTHY OF THEIR RESPECT, ALWAYS.<p>

HUG YOUR KIDS AND SAY 'I love you' OFTEN. HUG YOUR MATE AND SAY 'I love you' TWICE AS MUCH, AT LEAST.<p>

May God Bless all of you readers with the love, patience, and understanding that Texas Refugee has given all of us in this story. And Tex.... thank you.

This is one of the best stories I have EVER read. You have got to continue with this work of writing..

The entire series left me speechless. I sat and read them all in one night. I had intended on sleeping after the first, but could not bring myself to do so. You are an exceptional author and I grant you every praise an author can be granted. You have literally touched my life with this story, it is something I will remember for the rest of my days. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I am 19 years old, live in Texas, and was motivated to tears of joy.

I agree with all the other posts. It was a gripping narrative and of a much higher calibre than a lot of

the wham-bam stories that get posted here. I felt that

I could relate to all of the characters.

One of the things that my wife and I hate about porno movies is their lack of a plot. The same could be said about most "Adult Stories". The one thing that we both like about your stories, is that sex is not the foremost thing about it, rather it is intertwined into the plot. The story is a very good example of all that can be and is good in life. Too often we concentrate on only the bad in our life, and forget all of the good people and good times that we have all around us. This was a very good love story that helps us remember all of what we should hold dear in our lives.

A great story with "nice" people, how you manage to keep track of the characters absolutely astounds me, congratulations I will come back to this story many times in the future.

i read the first two chapters twice waiting for the third chapter. i think that this story is by far the best that i have read. wonderful work.

I didn't get much done, but did I have an enjoyable time. I was concerned that I'd be wondering about these nice people and their futures, but you ended the series beautifully.

Thanks for an excellent time. Write when you get a chance. We'll be waiting.

Wow. I don't know what else encompasses my feelings about your story. It was fantastic. Amazing. I would advise you to try writing a novel and see where it takes you. I have been reading literotica stories for several years but yours drew me in and kept me interested. I laughed, felt sad, and all around enjoyed it immensly. Thank you for sharing this with us, the reading public, it was a true pleasure. In some sort of selfish desire I ask only one thing... please don't stop writing for literotica, because I would love to read more of your work. Thank you again, and it was fantastic...

Make Bobby and Colleen your average un-related couple and you pretty much just have a really sweet love story. OK...not. It could have all blown up in their face, and would have spilled all over their immediate family as well. Crazy! Love makes us all a bit crazy. Thank god...Nicely done Tex...Now...you really have to write a HELLAVA lot more dammit! Being Lazy is an temporary passtime, NOT a permanent condition...

Thank you for having written a very entertaining and really beautiful love story. I read all three of your "chapters" in order and almost dreaded to see the conclusion of such a fine tale.

Thanks, Texas Refugee, for telling us the rest of the story! All my questions were answered, all the loose ends tied up in a very entertaining and believable way. (Of course, I could see the Harold-Margaret connection a mile off.) Honestly, you should expend your writing energy on books that will reach a much broader and larger audience. TR, you owe it to the world.

Hi Texas, I too took your double dare...I more than appreciate the work you've done, you took me through the full gamut of emotions as I read all three episodes in the one night and could not agree more with most of your other readers

...WELL DONE...

I agree with the comment that this could have very easily been a "Romance" category. It is as good as or better than Montana Summer, in a somewhat different way...both excellent and I might add " a long time coming" but oh so worth it! Great job!

First, a note to the commentor who couldn't read "Montana Summer". What a shame. You missed something on a par with this one. That said, "Colleen" was a great piece of writing that made me laugh out load in the quiet of my little casa here in Mexico, not an easy feat for a 79-year-old widower. It also, again, moved me to tears many times over. The line about learning where babies come from was as priceless as the tuna fish crack in 2. Great job.

great story but the last chapter was a litte long probably should have been 4 chapters also it would have been nice if you had put some dates in the story especially the last chapteryou squeezed about twenty years into one chapter jumping from year to year very confusing

Since Friday morning I have read all three chapters of this fantastic love story. I can't think of any other words to describe it other than amazingly incredible. Each chapter draws the reader into the story emotionally, and this chapter really did so for me, bringing tears to my eyes. It's amazing, because once you get into the story, you kinda forget that Bobby and Colleen are brother & sister, and this story surpasses any other story in this category and, I'll venture to say this, the whole entire site with an infinite difference between the quality.

I would like for you to know, that you most certainly did not waste your time on this story, because it is satisfying to me, and other readers I am sure, in many different aspects.

Thank you for your incredible narrative, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

i took your double dare...HAHAHAHA. i appreciate the work you've done, as an avid reader of most anything, i once again thank you.

Although I --- intellectually --- agree with the author to have the main character eternally severing himself from a woman he loved deeply, never ever want to know any thing about her and her heinous crimes against him, IN A VENGEFUL AND TWISTED WAY, and great as the story about the lives of Robert and Colleen has turned out to be, in the back of my mind, in my guts, I want to see and know what the bitch has become. <p>

After all these years, I wonder in the memories of her memory if she has eternal regrets about heinously hurting someone who is a very decent, loving, and nurturing human being who --- all the years you've been with him --- woke up every morning and go to bed every night thinking of you first and foremost. <p>

In the back of mind mind, Barbara --- whose "surprise" and reciprocal love for for Robert, giving birth to a bi-racial baby of a rapist and a criminal who was quickly convicted, sentenced to prison and then quickly stabbed to death --- in the back of my mind, as I slowly relish the sexy, loving, tender, nurturing, and long-lasting life of Robert and Colleen, I wonder, "What is Barbara thinking or doing these moments.... all these years.... without that someone who loved her and only her totally?" <p>

Whether she cried herself to sleep when there's just her and the baby from the Black rapist-extortionist whom, at certain point, Barbara must have been giddy and armorous with, as they fucked away into the dawn, thinking she and her lover of endless stamina were having the best of all worlds....<p>

I wonder whether Barbara grew old wiser or bitter and hateful.....Whether she longingly wished for secand chances, reliving again again, so she could make better decisions, in trusting her instincts, in confiding in the mate who was willing to die for her, who was there to wipe her mouth when she threw up.... <p>

And, yet, again, I totally agree with Texas Refugee to NOT have Rober think about a painful past that he would never again revisit, even if just in thoughts or passing. I was very piqued when the author had Mrs. Lopez, Robert's old scretery back in Chicago, ask him whether or not he wanted to know any "thing else" about his old/forgotten Chicago life.... I thought the author was going to have Robert say, "Sure, tell me about..." But, no, instead the author had the hero succinctly say, "No, thanks. I don't want to know any thing else about that life". <p>

That was simple, good, non-scripted, non-Literotica formulaic-writing.

Thank you for an incredible story. Well written and a great read. I didn't think that you could do a better job than the first...then I read Chapter 2...and tonight I am not even surprised at the quality in Chapter 3. Thank you for this unconditional love story. I hope you will continue to write.

I too have been checking back daily for the conclusion to this wonderful story! I was so excited to finally see it, and I have to say, you certainly did not disappoint! Please keep writing. Your entries are greatly appreciated by this reader.

Yes, you included it all as far as emotions for both the characters and the readers of your story. I felt disgusted and frustrated in chapter 1 right along with the characters. The sensuality and love was very pronounced throughout the story. I laughed and teared in chapters 2 and 3 with the antics of the kids along with Margaret.

While some of the reactions of family to Colleen and Bobby's relationship was somewhat incredulous, it could not have been otherwise and still show the deep familial love and support that each member seemed to exude to their siblings. Totally supportive family was the message here and a heartwarming one at that.

Please, please, please continue with your writing if this is the quality that you have set as your standard. So what if it takes you a while to "pound the keyboard" to produce. The wait is worth it and I trust that the kudos from the readers are enough encouragement for you to continue.

Can't wait for your next offering...

*(wanted to have an eye catching title, but....stunned, jaw hanging...)

Dude!! "Colleen" ruined my Friday night out!!! Well, I'll

just have to settle for a warm "just read a wonderful book"

sort of evening........seriously, try doing a novel, I'll

demand an autographed edition!

You did a fabulous job with this story.

I normally don't read very long stories, but this captivated me from the very start of the first chapter. With each successive page, and chapter, it got my curiosity going even more. I hope you'll keep writing. Since you gave all of us advice, let me share some with you, and all, advice given to me from author Norma Fox Mazer. "All writing begins with you. Don't be afraid of what you think".

is that I've never been able to sit down and read the incredibly well-reviewed MONTANA SUMMER series. <p>

I actually tried a few times, in the first half or so installments. I could never get it off the ground and moving, into the story and characters, etc. I have seen the rave reviews and I have also read short synopses, so I know the athor, DARKSIDE OF THE MOON, is an extremely good writer. And, yet, for some reason, to my own regret, I have never been able to read it! <p>

But I truly love LONG, elaborate spectables and pagentry when it comes to stories. LONGHORN_07's tales of love, loss, and sometimes redemption....HUMMINGBYRD07's long Scince Fiction series.....GaryAPB's BACK TO BRISTOL... You name them,,, the longer, the better, once I get to know the quality work of an author.... <p>

COLLEEN, by Texas Refugee, is one of those long, good ones. <p>

I guess one of my problems is that I have very limited focus: <p>

I like to see and feel and touch and sense the goosebumps on the woman's stomach, or breasts, as she's being made love to lanquidly by ONE caring guy, in a fantastical Romeo-Juliet world, where they and only they, at that time and that place, exist. No one else exist or matter. Not even the exploding of a supernova 1 light year away (which must have happened exactly one year ago to the time of this love making event). <p>

COLLEENS is in that vein: <p>

two very loving individuals coming together and for a time, they gaze longingly into each other's infinite souls, ignoring the hundred billion other star systems in the Milky Way and the hundred billion other galaxies in the cosmos.... I could actually ignor the fact that they are siblings. <p>

Orgies, on the other hand,,,, where the woman or women are being pummeled like little fake Tammy Baker barbie dolls, screaming like dolls with rechargable batteries whicn never wane, where a few minutes later, the guys scream like being bitten by Vick's bulldogs, and pull out from the women's but, vagina, or ear holes and run scurring to pointing their dicks at her mouth and spraying her thick, ugly smelly lather of bodily seminal, vagina, and shit fluids ------ I just don't find such multiple-people engagement very "exciting" or erotic.... <p>

Of course, it is reported that women, many women, find such unclen, unsave, smelling acts quite aphrodisiac and they scream like they are perpetually orgasming [99 percent of the time false/pretending and NOT very believable, either]. Many READERS, too, seem to like such smelly, unclean bodily fluid exchange, of roomfuls, where women doing most of the injesting and swallowing, thus serving the receptors of basically all of the tens of trillions of bacteria, germs, and viruses being passed around/discharged.... <p>

To me, that's pretty gross.

Really a gr8 luv story. The first chapter seems very heartening. I wud luv to buy it if it were made in a book

All I can say is what a tome,where you been in prison or something,nice to see you up and fighting again,the story,loved it.

The story of brother and sister at first was intriging, But get past the first chapter and you realise that this story was born of true love, Be it by the charactors that were written about or by the author in his dedication to get things right. I have never read anything on literotica in any genre that was better than this story, From start to finish you felt part of the lives of the people in this story and to me that shows the sign of a fantastic writer who is completley dedicated to his craft and a natural ability to tell a story. I don't know the words to describe just how fantastic i thought this gentleman was in writing this story but if this was written into a book and was available to buy i would purchase it and keep it as a treasured addition to my small liberary(please excuse my spelling) kind regards and all the best and continued success, Steve

i haven't read it yet.. i was going to bed to take a nap.. just checked to see if number 3 is on.. as i have been doing the past on eand half year....

now, u ruined my nap.. but,

thanks .. thanks.. thanks...

the post-reading comment will come later..

It's funny... last night I was re-reading Chapter 1, and thought to myself, "I wonder when Texas Refugee's ever going to write that third chapter?" You really pulled out all the stops, and your final chapter in the story of Bobby and Colleen has cemented this in my mind and heart as one of the best stories I've ever read on Lit. I take my hat off to you, and wish you the very best with whatever future stories you've got in the pipeline.