All Comments on 'College Daze Ch. 01'

We enjoyed it!

More of the story, more sucking, more fucking. We need part 2.

You have a real knack for this Styleguy. I hope there's a lot more where that came from.

especially with more blackmail.

Make it a long series. This could be good. I think Michelle should have a daughter in college that comes home for break ;)

I loved it.....It made me hot!! Keep them cumming!!

June should get involved in the Blackmail also.

i agree with them keep this story cumming.... made me wet lol

I hope when you take her ass it's rough. Love banging a milfs ass when they're not into it.

Oh My !!! I love it so far, many more to cum i hope

Loved the story, didn't like the idea of including the love interest, June in the blackmail. Keep them seperate, like the intro implies and keep the stories coming.

Dude, where was the sex with Michelle, seriously, you made her cum 5 times, with what? what did he do to her to make her cum 5 times? Sure you glazed over that they had sex, but this is literotica, where was the erotica, that was an error in storytelling that even Michael Bay would find atrocious. Otherwise it was promising. Oh and don't involve June in the blackmail, keep it seperate, like Bert and Loni.

This was a great beginning with a wide enough foundation to spin off a number of stories and series. My personal preference is to focus on Michelle. The idea of an 18 year old dominating a successful business woman is hot. Chris is a pretty bad SOB (like you said in the story). Maybe you can have Michelle take him out on a date where she is forced to dress like an 18 year old. People would be staring at the skankiness of Michelle, making her extremely uncomfortable, while Chris is basking in glory of his prize.

I'd like to see her eating her married girlfriend to get the slut ready for you. Maybe side my side doggy style as they each get butt fucked!

Where is the next College Daze?! I've been checking for days! We really need more about what happens to Michelle and her cheating married girlfriend! I know you need the Dr. Jekyll side, too, but I hope to see a lot more of the Mr. Hyde-side in the future; the Michelle, etc., plot is a lot more interesting than the "true love" side. Hope more of the story appears soon!

This is WRONG WRONG WRONG!

I love it :)

Keep up the good work.

I want to read what happens next!

Made me wet too! Make the sex more graphic tho. Want to read more about Michelle and her married friend and the blackmail.

You have a style that is bar-none, the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading! There's a plot, there's substance and there's hot steamy sex. Considering this was written from a college guy's point of view? I wouldn't have expected too much in the way of elaborate sex moves or such. You have a talent like none I've ever seen. Keep up the great work!

Great story so far with a lot of potential.

Please continue with Chris, Michelle and June, Tammy and some friend of Michelle

Great start! Please continue with this series. Very well done so far.

I like the way you wrote this and how you developed the main character. Don't change the story, but add more details. You get five stars from me.

I'll never feel sorry for a blackmailed cheating whore...

more please.

Yes

I enjoyed your LW story "An Event .... with a capital E" Aftre readin parts of severalothers, you are a capable writer but come across as a waste product. Never any empathy or understanding offered and these are merely fantasy characters. You must make a lot of people disgusted to know you. Get some counseling. You aren't broken but come across as severly damaged.

Where is the rest?.

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It's been over 15 years and you haven't done anything with this story, so I guess it doesn't really matter what I think of it.

I wised author wouldn't leave intresting series unfinished.