by patience90
The first poster is right, you have to keep up with this! Since you call this chapter 1, it sounds like you intend to. The girl seems like a very nice person, she didn't hurt the geezer. Give her a life like that.
Those great story about a girl and her having phone sex with Paul. I hope you write the second chapter where she meets him and finally loses her virginity to him.
It is always interesting to see an 'english teacher' comment on an erotic story, its all about the story if you can't get past that but must see the grammar then keep it to yourself, i liked this story, please keep writing
Please tell me you plan on continuing this. This lines up very neatly with fantasies I had during college of meeting up with an older gentleman over the internet and eventually arranging for him to take my virginity...Very sexy story, very believeably paced.
I hope you read this because you're good and should write more often.
I scored you a 5, top marks and do hope you'll reconsider retirement, you're much too young and I'm sure you've had more experiences to write about by now.
Hi Patience, just read your story. I am from Hawaii and was wondering if you have continued having phone sex and masturbating.