by willwork4wine
There isn’t a man alive who can correctly guess a woman’s breast size more often than not. You should get rid of the numbers and use descriptive terms instead.
I enjoyed the story and look forward to "fate" intervening. I always try in my writing to make the characters in the story believable. You've done a great job of revealing their thoughts and feelings. You made an OK fuck story into an excellent bit of erotica. Well done!
Great build-up. Wish the "climax" could have had more detail like the rest of the story does, but I can't wait for what Fate had in store for our two lovebirds. Great job and 5-starrs!