by Pelios
Very sensuous, very sexy. The author trusted the characters enough to take time with the plot, which paid off handsomely. I was tingling deliciously after this little gem...
Another great story by a very gifted writer! I love everything you have written and posted here. It's all wonderful! Your are one of my favorites on Literotica!! Thank you for sharing your work.....
The story was very good, with the characters filled out enough to make me care a bit and the last scene was very well done.
The end where they're both married was a bit of a rude shock, you should have left it at that; then you could've done a followup story or let our imaginations wander. It fells a bit like a very cold shower after such a well written piece.
I have enjoyed all of your stories. Have been reading this type literature for nearly sixty years and you among the best authors in my experience.
Please keep the stories coming. Thanks. Red
You say: "she had the imagination to ask for quite a few things" and then THE STORY ENDED !!! I was crushed !! I wanted to know what wild, imaginative things came next through that year at college - dildoes, strap-ons, bdsm, threesomes? PLEASE KEEP THE STORY ALIVE !!
I love stories based on College Girls and this story just re-enforced that love some more! Thank you for the story!
That...was....THE..hottest story.
I almost came just reading it...i havn't even touched myself!!!
I was so wet from reading this story that I was easily able to slide 3 fingers in my pussy. I exploded when April did... over and over... wow. I love the way you write!!
I truly loved the story, made me feel like I was really involved in it, so believable, loved it
Hot shit. Thanks, I really needed to get off with a new fantasy! Thanks, thanks, and Thanks.
The building tension of this story is very well done. I applaud your character choices. April and May actually remind me of two girls I know at a Christian school; I don't really believe that they're lesbians, but I like to think they are!
This was the first story I read of yours and enjoyed it very much. Erotic,exciting and arrousing. I promply went to your bio to see if you had any others and was not disappointed.I have now read all of your stories and eagerly await your next one. All are 5 star. You have a new best fan from Texas. Thanks for sharing.
fuck! this made me so horny! i got so wet from reading this! it sounded so good that 1 day at my friends house i started fooling around with her and she didnt mind and in 10 min i was actually licking her pussy! it was great!!! i cant wait till next time i see her, i want her to lick mine! thanks sooo much for this story!
Brilliant, the drama, scene setting and emotions described were perfect in this story. This wasn't just a story about sex, or love making. It was about real emotions and the emotional rollercoaster both girls went on with each other.
Brilliant writing, made me very hot :)
One hell of a good story.WOW a must read! The detail and conviction put into this was just ( !!!!!!!!! ).... I enjoyed Reading this so much,I had to tell myself to breath.Thank you Pelios. W.S.
It makes me curious as a monkey going downtown to read the next one.
Very nice submission. I found it engaging and not ridiculous. Quite believable and certainly spicy. Reluctance..to...wonton desires!
I really can't say what made this so erotic, but I'm horny as hell now and that's unusual --very few of the stories actually do it for me. I haven't put my finger on it yet, but my hotel isn't far from the terminal, so...real soon now.