All Comments on 'College Jock Sneaks Through Window'

Very nice start. I hope they spend the night together or at least a few more hours.

Coming into his window uninvited is top-shelf creepy. Started off on the wrong foot - plus did Jake shut the blind (doubtful) so their whole sexcapade was there for the next passerby to watch? After that the story got hot. The twist that Jake took Avery’s big dick in his ass was sexy.

so good it requires more chapters

I thought every aspect of this story was great. Knocking on the door is boring. Sneaking in through the window and fulfilling fantasies is hot. I fully agree that there should be more chapters. Hopefully, at least three.

The story was awesome; but need to clear something up as it seemed important: you mentioned jake wears a hearing aid, then mentioned it again as Avery took it off…why mention it when it didn’t play an important part?

To the one asking the point of the hearing aid. It's really just a minor thing, nothing ground breaking.

It served two points. One, Avery is a bit nervous throughout the encounter. He also didn't do much. Him reaching to pull it off and kiss his ear shows that Avery is a bit more confident to step up and engage in the encounter.

There's also an emotional level for Jake. The hearing aid is his way of remaining connected with the world around him. By Avery taking it off and Jake then sinking into Avery, it's meant to show that Jake has found that connection through Avery rather than the world.

But I mean, really just a fantasy story haha. But I like adding small bits of other things to my writings.

So sweet :)

Wow, this was an awesome story! I’m willing to excuse the “intruded through the window” part since it’s just a hot fantasy. But you managed to make this feel emotional and connected for both of the boys, which was a pleasant surprise and made the story so much more intimate. And I like what you wrote about the hearing aid, that shows the growth of both of the boys in such a short period. Any chance of a sequel? I have a soft spot for these kinds of stories