All Comments on 'College Misery Ch. 01'

Please do comment if you feel something needs to be improved :)

After reading this, I felt a little confused. I got the plot but the story seemed a little jumpy (for lack of a better word). It seems there could be more to come and I hope there will be more balance... a smoother telling of the scenes you wish us to see.

3 stars.

it needs to be longer and way more detail. I did like it tho.