by Bailey_R_Britton
Very sexy story, it was a bit over the top carrying out the “inspection” in a public place. I thought that it detracted from the story but you were aiming for the public humiliation aspect. I think a case of deliberate “accidental” exposure would work really well.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
As highly erotic and so very descriptive as this effort was, I too found the all too public inspection was off-putting and just ludicrous. Excusing the policy due to "budget cuts" is embarrassing. Having tossed enough arrows at that aspect of this story, I very much enjoyed everything else about it. If only it was longer and reached a continued highly charged progression. Now in an effort to achieve "lift-off", I shall check some of your other works. Thank you!
Jim
The TSA would have a better reputation if they were this thorough and thoughtful.