All Comments on 'Combat Healer Ch. 04'

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skippersdadskippersdadover 1 year ago

GREAT CONTINATION more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One small issue I have with this story is the slingshot. Slingshots need vulcanized rubber or some other similar materials, which weren't invented until the 1800s. If those materials did exist, then they would be used in many places such as tires and elastic stuff.

A weapon that would fit more is the sling because all it needs is string/rope and a small pouch.

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

Enjoying this series immensely.

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

Hi Anonynmous I did a quick search and it seems ancient slings and ancient slingshots are the same weapon. Modern slingshots use rubber and are fired directly but the ancient slingshots were rotated around.

Apexrogue99Apexrogue99over 1 year ago

This is amazing, please continue to make more of this series. I absolutely live the dynamic of Mel and Allister.

KaizerWolfKaizerWolfover 1 year agoAuthor

@Apexrogue99

Yep, Chapter 05 is pending right now, and I actually have this story written up to Ch 21 right now on my Patreon:

patreon.com/KaizerWolf

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(My bio has information about my release schedule and such.)

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Really loving this!

ClearmuseClearmuse2 months ago

Enjoying this story and style, feels like I'm gonna end up binging!

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