All Comments on 'Come and Stay with Me, Miss'

by EgmontGrigor2020

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
my 2 cents

Ah, just like a woman. A man helps her out of a bad spot and she takes over his life to keep him on the straight and narrow (right into her arms). Nice story and I like the characters. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I....

I really enjoy reading your stories.

I think that they are quirky and out of the box.

I fail to comprehend how your spelling, missed words occur in some and not others.

I think 5*

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Okay start. Characters didn't fit and with their histories. Speech seemed over the top, almost like a cliche.

You need to check read before posting. Too many word ertors.

Rancher46Rancher46about 3 years ago

Cute story, enjoyed the read, though could have been longer by continuing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Weird language that isn’t realistic to the characters and a dozen other things that are jarring and don’t fit the storyline. Good idea, bad execution. 3⭐️

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