by EgmontGrigor2020
Ah, just like a woman. A man helps her out of a bad spot and she takes over his life to keep him on the straight and narrow (right into her arms). Nice story and I like the characters. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.
I really enjoy reading your stories.
I think that they are quirky and out of the box.
I fail to comprehend how your spelling, missed words occur in some and not others.
I think 5*
Okay start. Characters didn't fit and with their histories. Speech seemed over the top, almost like a cliche.
You need to check read before posting. Too many word ertors.
Cute story, enjoyed the read, though could have been longer by continuing the story.
Weird language that isn’t realistic to the characters and a dozen other things that are jarring and don’t fit the storyline. Good idea, bad execution. 3⭐️