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hermit3773over 2 years agoFantastic! My only negative comment is that you have used the saying "flattery will get you everywhere" many times. A little variety might be better.
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PoisonPen33@PoisonPen33You ever have a friend who keeps saying, "you should write a sexy thriller" or "how about an erotic novella" or even "PORN! SIT DOWN AND GIVE US SOME PORN!" Well, I hope they're happy. I prefer longer stories with dialogue and personal connections for the sexy times. My le...
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