All Comments on 'Come Get Me, Fwin'

A college English professor once told me a person hasn't really read something until they've read it twice. When re-reading your stories, they get better with each reading. Damn, you're a good writer! =]

I don’t usually delve into fantasy, but I really enjoy your work, so here I am. I’m glad I made an exception.

This was wonderfully yearning and bittersweet. The slow reveal of the depth of her sadness and the husband’s abuse was handled so deftly. You did an amazing on capturing the frustration and despair of being trapped in a situation with no good options, only less bad ones.

I loved this story! It took me through many emotions and arousal depths. Thank you, Author.

Tattooed_cowgirl

One of the easiest things to do in a relationship is to forget that your needs and wants deserve to be acknowledged and met as much as those of your partner(s) are.

Losing your identity and sense of self should never be the price for a relationship.

The main thing I love about this story is the emphasis you've placed on the need for a damaged person to want to fix themselves in order to change. We can't do it for them no matter what magic we can work or how much we want it to happen.

It's a hard truth that many can't accept. I'm sure many readers of this story saw a bit of themselves reflected in the characters you've crafted and perhaps they didn't like what they saw reflected back at them. Personally? I didn't like what I saw, but then again, I can face my shortcomings and attempt to learn from them.

5* for blending high fantasy with a cruel dose of reality so seamlessly.

Grass is greener on the other side story. Only get married or have kids with someone you can stay with or dont bother doing either.

This has to be the shittiest story I've ever read. Stupid, dumb and degrading, you can see the direction this garbage is heading in from the very first page... Do you have even a slightest idea what actual love is like?