All Comments on 'Come Home With Me Pt. 01'

With all your preamble I was a little leery but figured 'what the hell, this is R410a'! Glad I did great story and more to come.

Cheers

SAGE

Another quality tale! :) I'll certainly be following along as you take us down the river of your story. :)

It always makes my day to see something new from you. :) I don't even look at the genre anymore - I know I'll like it.

I'm enjoying the journey. Not sure where it's going but that is the best part.

Great story. Looking forward to the next part.

Very promising. I will rate this upon story completion.

Awesome start. Eagerly waiting for the next part

I really enjoy your work.

Steve

Looking good so far, glad this didn't become another rich guy saves downtrodden hooker (who has a heart of gold) story. 5*

I'll hold off reading this, like I usually do in multi-part stories, so I can read it all in one go when it's finished. I just wanted to say for now, thank you for your service, sir. Also, thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Thanks for dumping the hooker. Great story so far.

Very promising. I do like a long story with a good lead in. Looking forward to the rest.

Great story that's entertaining to read, with just enough sex to make it erotic but not the cut and paste nonstop over the top found in some stories. Enjoyed how Martin is rebuilding his life and refreshing to see where the "ladies" aren't all beauty queens with pert tits, perfect teeth, blond hair etc., but are still worth being with. Looking forward to the next part.

Well written with lots of variety apart from the sex.

Good story. Martin seems to be fairly well adjusted, for a young man with his roots and life experiences. Seems to have a solid handle on coping with his PTSD. It’s kind of sad, that he’s almost always alone, and has no contact with his brothers. They might have been interested in hearing about Adrian.

Excellent story, loving it.

Awaiting the next chapter.

Scores 5/5

Made me laugh like a drain! Really good!

Great story! I hope there part.

5

Great story! I hope there is another part.

5

I really enjoy the stories with a little smit n a good story line fine job looking fwd to the next part.

Love your story, can't wait for part 2.

Can't wait for part two. I'm trying to figure where you're going to take this one, I thought he was going to end up with the girl from Chicago.

Martin should fuck that attitude right out of Shelley.

Up to your usual high standards! I mean that sincerely. You are one of the best writers on this site.

Best wishes,

Paul

Very enjoyable read looking forward to more.

Beautiful love story! I really like Martin and his personality/attitude. I picture him as a real man's man, with a really heart of gold. As a manly muscular man, I imagine a hairy chest and abs -- a real sexy turn on for his bed partners. I hope he finds a really good gal to settle down with and become a dad.

Interesting story. One never knows what adventure is coming next. My kind of a story. Thank you. 5*.

what a fun with advetures story five

A very good story. The stories aren’t all wild sex and revenge. Very calming to me. Want to see what’s up next for Martin and I hope Ann.

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Lovely story, my favourite of yours so far.

A good intelligent start with plenty of detail, I'm still waiting for any romance to start???