by MastrStoryTeller
perfection achieved, brilliant and amazing!! the build was like a bad porno, but it somehow felt so wonderful that i could not stop reading. you sir are a master at story telling. only thing that MILDLY disapoints is that it's not 'true incest' but since i'm not an extreemist with my love of such stories... i love it anyway!!
One of the best sexually charged and erotic stories I have read, very hot girl on girl sex.
In some ways the sex between father (step) and daughter was out of love but still between a horny man and young woman in need of feeling sexy and loved as a sexual woman.
The only part of the story that I didn't agree with was shooting cum on thier face, I have always found that as degrading a woman, although a lot of women seen to enjoy it.
That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read on here. Great storyline, super hot sex.. please keep em cumming!
Outstanding, one of the best I've read. I look forward to more of this or other stories.
I really loved this and hope you keep us in the know as to how things are working for you and Amy.After all you can have her all the time so please keep her hot cunt happy.A HOT STORY WISH I HAD SOMEONE TAKE CARE OF MY CUNT THAT WAY.I'm SO HOT!!!
i applaud you and i love your choice of words absolutely brilliant!!!
Hope there will be more about Amy in the not too distant future----
amy you make my cock so hard it hurts and i wanna fuck you harder and faster then he did
I can't wait to have my girlfriend read this, and see what kinds of thoughts she gets out of it. I think this is a terrific story, good as a stand alone stroker as well as the lead in chapter for hopefully many more.
Thanks
I appreciate the author can write as they wish, but this could be a great 2 page story -- in stead of a long drawn out so so 5 page story. Great potential lost in the words.
Hope there's more to this story. .She needs to divorce the ass hole and marry her step dad.