All Comments on 'Coming Home for Christmas'

by LilBird9898

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Hi, here from the Winter Holiday contest. Great job making this incredibly hot and sexy, with the bet and the extra payoff being fun. The one part that took me out of it for a second was when she presents herself for a hard doggy-style romp and he thinks of doing anal with her instead and it almost "made him came" (come?) as a result. That sounded a little off to me under the circumstances, but everyone has their own preferences and perhaps that was his. The next two lines pulled it back in focus anyway, and the ending was super hot! 5*

Best wishes in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This one wins “hottest” in my book!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 BUT too short

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