All Comments on 'Coming Home Pt. 01'

Excellent start to the story. I hope there is an equally good follow-up chapter. Looking forward to it!!

Great start and cannot wait for the next parts

Very good first story. Some paragraphs were "telling" the reader rather than "showing" but it was not constant. Looking forward to future installments.

Good first outing! 4.6*

looking forward to the next part.

Enjoyed this story. Waiting for part 2.

The whole story is so genuine. Loving it!

FTDS 5/5 so far

Rule number one: write all parts before publishing the first! Otherwise quite good for your first story. I’m looking forward to the rest of this tale. 5*

Nicely done first story. Looking forward to the next chapter. You should be proud of yourself for the story and for pursuing your writing interest so passionately.

Great first story!

5

Very good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great first story. Nicely done!