by DallsBeep
Very good story I really enjoyed the emotional part of it the feelings that each had for each other refreshing to see that is such an over the top story. Keep up the good work .
Great story. Would be even better if Caitlyn was revealed to be the result of Jess's one night stand with Manuel in the past.
You Sir have mastered the fine art of "Show,Don't Tell"! This one of the best short stories that I've read on this platform. Deep characters with compelling back stories, and very visually graphic scenes. The only thing things that I would wish out of this story is MORE OF IT! 5 STARS ⭐⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️