All Comments on 'Coming of Age and Coming Out'

hi there, Your story was really good,it's got emotion and a pretty good storyline, can't wait to read the sex scenes (if ever you decide to put some.LOL)

keep up the good work!!!

Please don't keep us waiting long ... Very good plot and great story

I like what is written so far; a little overplayed keep with the story. I will read more.

Get yourself an editor. It will be easier to read without errors.

This is a good start. However, you do need an editor and maybe do some proof reading on your own. But the story elements are there for a really good story. Please keep it up and finish the story. I really want to know what happens.