All Comments on 'Coming of Age Ch. 02'

Painful to read, give it up.

get one.

Lovely set up and the homely details make it more realistic. Cock in ass and strap on in mouth works well. Keep it up :)

Could you please write a part three to this?!?

I agree there are a few grammatical errors in the story but hell. This story made me cum hard. I loved it. Please write another "chapter" or whatever you're calling them I would love to read it :) and people are dicks. You can't please them all. Keep going please!! But grammar would be good to fix if I can put my two cents in :)

...for your spelling, grammar and continuity in Ch.1 'Coming of Age'

It would have felt sincere if you had gone back and fixed anything.

I read this series when first published, hoped you'd found an editor or run it through Windows or Grammatic, then I returned today to admire your further efforts.

Disappointing.