All Comments on 'Coming Together'

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migmigover 18 years ago
Romance?

More like slut wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
more, more, more

write more, that was very hot.

include more fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What?

Not romance - only poor adultery.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It was a hot story for...

loving wives or even erotic couplings, but there was no romance in this story at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Betrayal

About as romantic as falling in a cesspool.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hmmmmm

could've used a little more development leading to the affair...

***3 stars***

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Romance???

This is a cheating wife story and belongs in the Loving Wives category. I hope the whore gets caught and dumped to the curb penny less.

Anonymous
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