by hg33
Welcome back. I think you've improved a lot since your last contributions, this entry shows much improvement on structure. I am looking forward to reading more from this series or anything else you may decide to write.
Just read this after reading your last series, you can see the improvement (also love that it's a sequel), hope you continue this.
This was the first time I've read any of your stories and i loved it! Really well written, great story line, good pacing and plenty of sex. Well done, I'm going to read more.