All Comments on 'Community College'

Hurry up with the next chapter please !!

More please.

Love where you’re, the devious artist you appear to be…

hope you do more with this one

Fantastic narrative! Please write a sequel!

Incredible ! 5 *

Fucking awesome! Loved it . Want to see the rest of your story.

Hey, I have actually just finished the next chapter and have run Grammarly but I need an editor or proofreader, I'm waiting on one as have asked a few on here, but haven't heard anything yet. My brain is not ready for proofreading today I want to continue with the next chapter as I'm enjoying this one. So shout if you know an editor or proofreader on here, thanks

Part 2 please

Oh yeah! Keep this one going. Please?

a sequel to This story ASAP please. Let him end up with the music teacher.

I'm going to keep my eyes closed until part 2 arrives ... after all I read for myself not others !

I'm going to keep my eyes closed until I can read part 2 ... after all I read for myself not others.

Some obvious errors, yes, but i think the majority of us can follow along just fine. Please continue, this is a very good story.

Please let him make it up with Helen, without her he's in danger of being just as big an asshole as those he hates.

Damn good story and would really like to see at least a part two or more. I really enjoyed the plot line so far and think is starts a good direction for part two.

Well done. Great characters. Thanks for this.

Great story and it is shaping up to be epic.

Outstanding!

Interesting story. Most of the characters are great, although some feel like throwaways due to a lack of detail. The plot is, well its good, but it feels wild, a little all over the place. Not sure if this is due to a lack of an editor/proofreading, or because this is part 1 of many, but I am genuinely confused about what this story is about. Give the story description, I expected a stepmother romance and was confused why its in mature, not incest/taboo as I was fully expecting Helen to be the wicked Stepmother. Then as other female characters was introduced, I expected some kind of harem story, yet nothing has come of it. The final appearance of the wicked stepmother feel rushed, and Im left with more questions than answers. Looking forwards to part 2 in hopes that said questions get answered and the wild plot gets tamed, but as it stands I can only rate this as 3 stars. It good, has potential to be great, but it the finesse to really stick the landing.

The second is just waiting on finding an editor/proofreader guys I think it's fine but some of you are picky about grammar etc so I am trying that route. The third is almost written and I had a great idea for the fourth while listening to some songs today as I am enjoying this story myself.

Really enjoyed this story. Can’t wait for the next part.

I am an emotional person and had tears in my eyes at times. Yes, there are some errors and issues, but I would rather read 1 story like this that has feeling, depth, and a fire in it, than 20 perfectly typed, yet shallow or unimaginative stories. Looking at your other stories next, after I follow you so I don't miss what's to follow!

Sweet justice in the end!

5

I get that many will discount the story you've authored and instead get fixated on the grammatical issues, it's easy to be a critic.

Please don't let that alter, delay or stop your creative process!

Most are here for the story and you've given us one that is unique and engaging and I very much look forward to its continuation.

Thanks!

Oh, hell yeah! We need to know how this plays out. Excellent story. I, for one, love the narrative-style story telling and wouldn't change a thing. Not one thing - except it ended too soon. :D

Loved that. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Great story and build up to same. Gave it a 5 for a wonderful story line along with character development. However, some of your readers (anons particularly) are only looking for one type of story. Keep writing and feel free to email me with projected publishing dates. Regards.

Brilliant

I came for the sex but stayed for the story. Simply amazing, good twists and turns and never predicable. Completely routing for the hero and anxious for chapter 2!!

Lovable weird savant. Have a feeling he's gonna do great in spite of his treatment. On too chapter 2. Five stars.

Addictive writing Bravo! Couldn't stop reading, on to Chapter 2...

Great. I like that it is more than just sex. When are we getting part 3?

I am anxiously waiting for part 3. You have done a very good job with character development and the story is well done.

YES!! 10 stars. Looks like MOMMY might be a little shocked... Good, the filthy whore. He needs to fall for a young fan in the audience

all i can say is Wow!

Yes, more please. Loved it !

Wow! Just Great!

If I am not mistaken, I believe I saw that you completed Part 4. I like other readers of this story are anxiously waiting for you to continue your story. It's very well done. I just don't like to wait. I know you are looking for an editor, but I really don't think it is necessary. You have written a very good story so far! 5 Stars.

This story has got me riveted! I’ve really enjoyed what I’ve read of your stories so far. Great job!

Fuck this is good, if you ever want it edited to resubmit for even better ratings if love to

Please hurry with Community College Part 5. You have a really good series going here! 5 stars.

Oh thank god, I was worried seeing there was no "part 1" or anything thinking it was a story with an abrupt ending but thankfully there are more parts of this what seems like still ongoing series. An interesting protagonist, large cast of characters some likable and some who are rightfully loathed, and a nice hook with the music. 5 stars, will continue to read the series.