by tedsgirl
Well, you know what they say, everybody has their own opinion.
You don't like it, oh well.
Kaf, I looked at your profile I see you have only 1 story published since 2001. Let's see I've had 47 published since I think 2015. I may not be a good writer but I do have people on Literotica who do follow me and they do enjoy what I write. So like I said in my other comment, you have your opinion about my story and that is your opinion.
My personal fave. Everybody - hubby, wifey and guest - had a great time, memorable sex. I loved it.
On the critical side, your ending was dragged out and a let-down. But overall, an erection producer!
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
Thank you for the nice compliment, sorry about the ending, I just hate ending a story by everyone cumming and then just leaving.
All stories have to end and when somebody fucks your lady, that's what usually happens. "Wham-bam, thank you, Mam" and they leave. When it's close friends it is different, but in this situation the ending is accurate. I've shared my wife many time and it's always different.
Thank you for the nice compliment, I'm going to continue to write as long as I can lol.
These stories are of things I dream about happening.
Love this story, so candid, refreshing. Would enjoy a picture or 2.
Thank you for the nice compliment. I will be writing more. I submitted another
story last night, hoping it gets approved.