by secondlife455
There should be a lot more "old takes young" stories on Literotica!
feel something like a man by writing tales about creeps with oversized dicks raping women
Yet another idiot who can't keep terms in properly understood usage. For this and the others out there its "cum" for an orgasm/semen/etc not "come" which is far different.
This is clearly a non consent story, if the other posters don't like the stories dont read them, it is childish and low to leave poor feed back because you loath the subject.
This was a good story, I especially like the boss was not handsome guy. Keep writing!!
and you got some stupid criticism. to the first anonymous commenter, this is in the right category, if you don't like it don't read it. and to the other anonymous commenter, a lot of authors consider cum/come interchangeable, some use "cum" as a noun and "come" as a verb, some use just one or the other. if that's your big criticism, take a look at some of the incredible drivel that passes for fiction on this site. this story was really well written compared to most of what i've seen on literotica. hell i've seen sadism spelled "sadisum". if you need to spread some hate go mess with the idiots who don't know the difference between there/they're/their or to/too/2. man, i hate anonymous comments. shit drives me crazy.
Is there a second part? Would be nice if he got her pregnant and she fell in love with the older man.