All Comments on 'Company Retreat'

by slksca

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Really immature dumb stuff

Wow and they will both be thirteen next month and can finallya date.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Yikes and more Yikes!

They need other people to spice up thier marriage? Well then the marriage should die right now and they should divorce and just be fuck buddies.

nyminusnyminusabout 15 years ago
Yes they should divorce and yes the story was

dumb as hell. We are suppose to believe that #1 The wife didn't know that the foot that was pubbing her bare pussy had a sock or show on. Now it's easy to get a shoe off without the husband sitting right next to him but the sock would require some movement that even the dumbiest of husband would notice...also the man had only fifteen minutes to do it. #2. Thew husband quit because the punk next to him dropped his napkin. #3. You stated that all the women were sitting across the table from thier husbands. Does this mean that the young guy was also married and that he mistook your wife's pussy for his own wife's? Your story is so full of holes. You led the readers to believe that your follow up story would have the husband wanking his cock while he watches the young lawyer fuck his wife at the next conference. Last you make it like the husband and wife were not respected#1 because the young guy felt that he could get away with it. What if the husband had tried to put his foot back up and found the young's foot there. If the wife was there then she would have noticed something. #2 Now call me dumb or something but let's see. The seating wasn't like economy on an airplane. The chairs would have been well spaced and the young guy would have had to stretch his leg over and actually rub against the husband's leg to reach the wife's spread legs. Let see if I forgot anything...oh yes...We are supposed to believe that a man that was smart enough to become a lawyer is stupid enough to throw it all away to rub some older woman's snatch...I think not...any way you indicated that another story is in the making..PLease don't. You can check my thread on STORY FEED BACK and you can bet that you'll be there.silska..that name sounds a lot like SILKLVR who I panned in yesterday's installment NYMINUS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great start!

I loved it. Nice little story line. Hey....it could happen.

I hope you write more about this adventureous couple.

Oh, and don't pay any attention to the limp dick cock suckers who put it down. Just feel sorry for them.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Another , fortunately, one really awful story author. Really bad.

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