by PaulStevens
I probably should of written before this on how much I have loved these stories. This one was very touching and I feel for Leah and Kara not knowing their daddy but having him so close. Please write on. Your a very good story teller.
You are a master of understanding complex emotions, and weaving them into a Story that brings each of the characters alive in the mind and heart of the reader. A remarkable skill.
My thanks to you.
Bryanfor
I want to say how much I've enjoyed this story, and all its complexities. You've managed to weave the various plotlines beautifully, and developed the characters really well, so that I feel I know them and can really empathise with them. Keep up the good work!
Great chapter. I enjoyed the fact that there was no sex in this one. Although this is an erotic site for a story like this to last there has to be a strong narative. This chapter helped that along nicley. Keep up the good work.
This is a beautiful story!
And one of the greatest chapter I've read so far!