by homerdepot
Great story and well written, Leaving it incomplete really peeves. Me if you want to write complete it then publish it, won't bother reading you anymore because I want a complete story
It seemed like chunks were missing in places....but it picked up at the end with the scene with Ruth watching Andy.
Why did he talk to thd therspist about his mum wanking him. This wasn't mentioned earlier, so assume he imagined this. He's omly 18 so why would anyone worry about him beating his dick snd not having relationships. More appropriate if he was 28 and still living at home, wanking himself and thinking his imaginary sessions with mother were real. Thinking fantasy was real would be far more disturbing and need therapy to help him.
This is one incomplete story. Were you on weed when you wrote it?
Terrible.