by erectus123
If you have arrived at this point I must apologise for the length of the story. Most of my works are shorter. I'd ask only that if you enjoyed this reading that you favor it, in that way you will be advised of new stories. Please be safe and take care in this crazy time of Covid. Best regards as always. Erectus123
in a couple of days. Only three more pages. Nice!
Very complicated story. Loved the Leonard lyrics thru-out. I got to see Mr. Cohen in his later years while he was touring the Midwest. Very interesting story that you don't see on literotica much. Thank you for it!
Thank you Crusader, You comments are much appreciated. Cohen's music changed as did his singing voice through the years. His original poems set to music from the 1965-70's are my favorites. If you listen carefully, and know a bit about his bio, most of his songs were about himself and his struggles. His music was the go to album in the late 60's when you and your lover turned off the lights. God bless Leonard, now deceased, life is not easy for everyone. The famous do not always have it any easier than the rest of us. Erectus123
along the way I visited a few places in common, felt the need to write and sing along with Leonard, revisit my younger days to correct all those missed opportunities lost or shrugged off.. Along with the 5 stars, I wish you peace.
Thanks Harry, finding peace is not easy, I guess it lies mixed with eternal rest. Yes we all had missed opportunities that we revisit in the darkness. Those we sought and lost, those we found and abandoned, those we've loved for a lifetime and still share precious moments in their arms. It's a strange journey, from womb to tomb and we all know there is a final chapter. What makes is worthwhile is the love we found along the way and the cathartic quality of sex. Afterall, we are animals and follow the rules of the kingdom that we are so well programed for. All the best dear Harry... Erectus123
"A dick is a dick is a dick, as Shake-a-spear was known to say in iambic pentameter."
This sentence pretty much captures the character of this story. An erudite, funny and light treatment of the erotic.
The episodic structure not my favorite - it limits the development of the characters and their chemistry in detail. It had a Marque de Sade feel - where quantity and kinkiness grounded the erotic.
I will definitely read more from this author.
i like some back ground to stories , especially as the tags really got my attention but the ramblings of the first page bored me so much , if my attention isnt grabbed with meaty , teasing instead of endless waffle , im off .
Well anon, you sure missed a lot by being inpatient. I hope you don't approach intercourse with the same attitude. But thanks for reading the first page and giving me your opinion.