by Ada Stuart
that your characters talk to each other during sex. It seems so immediate and real. Bravo!
I have been waiting for your post for a loooooooong time (sowwy for being demanding *saying sheppishly*), but i am glad you are still not losing your touch with your wittiness. Though this is good, but the build up of the stories is quite slow ya??? Are you planning to make it into a longer series? If yes, i will be more patient in waiting lol. Great post Ada.
I'm glad you liked it, and it will be a longer story. Right now I'm working on ch 12 and wondering how to end it all :-)
By the way, I love demanding readers so don't hesitate to tell me exactly what you like/dislike about the story.
I'm sorry that it's taking so long between each post, but since I'm a control freak I tend to put a lot of effort into each chapter before I post (although you wouldn't notice that when you see all the grammatical mistakes that tend to escape my eyes :-).
Hope you'll all be patient with me and happy reading :-)
Ada
Good job girl...hmmm i wonder,is ADA STUART trully u'r name?cause once upon a time there was an author(my fav)who have a name like your's.if u are her,i'll say im glad i found u again,sorry about my grammar,my spelling or my assumption...love u&love u'r work a looot...(pipit)
always glad to see new chapters appearing. think these two may be in for a surprise about each other *grins*
I think you're mistaking me with "Anne Stuart". She's mine favorite too and a great writer!
"Ada Stuart" is not my real name. It's actually a micture of my favorite author (Anne Stuart) and my favorite movie character (Ada in The Piano). Both of them write/act strong heroines that dare to go against the flow, and I really admire that :-)
I hope that this won't ruin the reading experience :-)
Ada
It really should be titled 'erotic computer goddess' I think- really a well written and very erotic story, and Kate is a great character (and the 'superheroine' of all 'geeks', I think). There is a lot of promise still, so please do continue Scott and Kate's story, if you can get the time.
with the order of this story. I've just started from the beginning. Order seemed good until chapter 4. Ch 4 skipped over the first time. Then chapter 5 skipped a bit ahead. Then chapter 6 came back to just after the first time, then chapter 7 skipped ahead. One chapter is repeated twice and we still haven't read how she first decided to give in to him...the most important part! So I'm confused and can't really enjoy the story. If I'm missing something, let me know and I'll go back and reread.
Oh my good, you're right. I've just republished all the chapters and copied the wrong chapter as ch 4. No wonder the story doesn't make any sense.
Thank you so much for letting me know and I'll fix it as soon as I can.
Ada
Naaaah...u'r answer still not ruin my reading experience,still love u&love aaaalllll u'r works...keep spirit...chayooo girl (pipit)
I love this series! Please Ada don't ever stop writing!
Still loving it. Some slight typos and mistakes but perhaps these are US English rather than UK English.
The story is good, lacking a little tension/drama but we have the discovery of her use of a detective to investigate him to look forward to. Definitely some typos to clean up.Looking forward to a nice HEA, wedding bells and babies.