All Comments on 'Computer Geek Ch. 08'

I totally wasn't expecting the story to go in that direction. Really enjoying it. Please keep the chapters coming. The deal can make things very interesting.

Excellent twist!! Can't wait to see where you take it!

I think they are both idiots but that makes me like the characters more. I really liked this update I can't wait for more

Didn't expect that one... what a drama!! LOVE IT!!!! Now I am begging for the next chapter. I hope she stays strong for a while just to put him in his place because what he did was cold!

eeeeeeeee boy u dont need feedback, u knw how good u r, love the sudden twist..........................its too dramatic not really real life thing but who cares, love ur every single word, waiting to see the fight................i knw it will end up as sweet ending. prove me wrong.

love the story..please follow up soon! As always Awesome stories!

you better make this good... hmmmm... follow up with the next chapter please...and FAST!!!

Here I thought we'd have a good ol romance and the bottom dropped out. I was all for your main character until he turned out to be just another jerk, and not to fond of her now either. Sorry, but the story line in this chapter left me totally disappointed....marrying her to get his money without love, and her marrying him without any physical contact. Pretty much a loser story. Bottom line, I pretty much totally disliked this whole chapter.

Felt like in a car crash! Everything went so fast and well, and then bang bang bang!.......

Kate's reaction does not make sense to me....... She is selling herself short and letting herself be hurt more. Be gentle with her, pls. She just had a big crash.

why would she do that?!? Marry him though she will get hurt even more.

I was totally loving Scott until I realized what a big jerk he is.

Please update soon!

i liked this story, sadly i have to partly agree with some previous comments. i'll wait for the next chapter nonetheless

I like all your work, but this chapter didn't turn out quite so well. It felt like they both had a personality transplant.

Personally I think this little twist made everything more interesting and I'm very grateful for that. I hope you update soon though I just adore this story.

I think I have to agree with the people who don't want things to change. I think this is a great chapter. Scott THINKS he doesn't love her, but he does. Her conditions will only make him realize that.

Personally I like the twist at the end. Scott thinks he doesn't love her and offered her a marriage based on sex alone. Her conditions are going to force his hand. Seriously love this story!

Love the story!

In all the romance i've written most chars have a personality change which is a condition for most good stories so i diss agree with some above ^_^ It gave some new purpose to the story ^_^ i really like it!!!!

I really liked this story and wair for the next chapter.

This chapter was a little rough in taking the story to the next stage and a little shallow on his character (maybe hers too) that doesn't really match how you made him out in the previous chapters.

Now silk is very smooth and nice but there is good need for jeans too in the world. This is a good pair of jeans.

That man needs a long lonely weeks before he realized he need Kate. Just please make Scott the one who begs. Kate's ego already suffers a lot. I guess its time to make it equal. And please make it quick. I check everyday for your work. Really love it. ^^

Ooooh im so Damn mad at that bastard! Lol. I must say I really did not see that coming. This story is great just like your others. The one thing I'm kind of hoping to see, even though it might go against the "erotica" part of Literotica, is for her to not give in and have sex with him. Let her be stronger than her desires and make him look like a fool. Pleeeeeaaaase.

i have been waiting on this story from when but it was worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!!

I loooooooove the twist!!!!!

But also a shit one, I don't normally leave negative responses but this story had been really good up until this chapter I know why you felt the need to introduce warren the asshole and then throw in the nonsense about Scott not loving her and only courting the fatty so he can keep his house and some of his money.

You need to get this back on track or else this is going to turn out crap.

Did not see that one coming.

This is pulpy fictional nonsense but leave your brain at the door.

(1) Characters on the whole are realistic. At least the girl has some backbone and some common sense though she does venture into stupid decision-making such as agreeing to marry him. She loves him but thinks that he doesn't, so she agrees to marry him anyway? Is she a masochist? He is less realistic than her. I can't believe he's been celibate for two years, especially if he's as attractive as you depict.

(2) Plot. This twist was pure Swiss cheese - straight from a Mills & Boon/Harlequin novel; illogical and unbelievable.

(3) Dialogue. On the whole, great banter and ramping up of sexual tension. Some deviation into the realm of crazy. They hardly knew each other and all of a sudden her boss is going to offer her a striptease? Sniggersome.

Overall; great read - it had me hooked! I think you just need an editor and perhaps stay away from Harlequin for your inspiration.

I wasn't expecting that. Just enough details to aid in suspension of disbelief

What an unexpected twist! Very heart wrenching but I can't wait for more!

WHAT HE REALLY DESERVED WAS A SWIFT KICK IN THE SACK! BUT WHATS HER PLAN IF NOT FOR LOVE? I NEED TO READ ON.

Well it spiced up and then those two twists so they're both on a hook. Interesting to read how this will work out. Don't care if it's a bit Mills & Boon I love it.